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Wednesday, November 7, 2012

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1. When ı first heard that ı had been accepted to Middle East Technical University, ı was disappointed. Because ı did not like Ankara as a city. But my opinions have changed over time dramatically. Because Middle East Technical University is really a different world in Ankara.

   When I first heard that I had been accepted to Middle East Technical University, I was disappointed because I did not like Ankara as a city. However, my opinions have changed over time dramatically because Middle East Technical University is really a different world in Ankara.

2. It has been only one month since I came here. But I got used to this environment. Because, first of all, people from all of ages in here respect to each other.
 
   It has been only one month since I came here but I got used to this environment because, first of all, people from all ages in here respect to each other.

3. I love Ankara, I love my dormitory, I love my friends, I love my department, I am content with everything which are belongs to METU.

   I love Ankara, my dormitory, my friends and my department, so I am content with everything which belongs to METU.

4. If someone wants to walk, he or she can go and walk. And it is nice place to go and meet with my friends.

   If someone wants to walk, he or she can go and walk. Moreover, it is nice place to go and meet with my friends.

5. We can easily see this by watching TV, surfing on the internet or maybe just looking around us. Because there are many people getting graduated from different kinds of universities but they're not even able to know what's going on around them or they don't even try to find good ways to improve the countries that they live in.

   We can easily see this by watching TV, surfing on the internet or maybe just looking around us because there are many people who graduated from different kinds of universities but they're not even able to know what's going on around them or they don't even try to find good ways to improve the countries in which they live.

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