REVISED ENTRY 2

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    In this article, the writer talks about the unexpected number of the young adults who live with their families in their homes. The writer states that young people couldn't manage to live in a seperate house from their families. She supported her ideas with examples and short stories. I agree with the writer. I think young people depend on their families in terms of psychological and financial issues. They should be with their families, and feel the support of their parents. It is important for them because they are not ready for the real life when they are only 18. Also, they have to be supported from their families financially because they don't earn money on their own. Earning money while they are going to school is so hard for young people. In the article, the writer also points out the increasing age of marriage among adults. It is a result of the fact that more young people live with their families. They want to live with their families untill they marry because they cannot earn their lives on their own. The writer states this idea with some examples. In general, I like this article and agree with the writer. The writer states the idea very explicitly.

      From this graphic. we can easily conclude that the number of the young people who live with their families has increased in the recent years. This stems from the financial re. Also, the lack of jobs among young people is another reason for this raise. To sum up, I believe that young people especially about 18 years old should live with their families.